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I like the warm colors of the clouds contrasted with the coolness of the night sky.

And that's how you got your username.

I can only imagine how Lemongrab would've taken something like that.

Pretty much agreed, although I was talking about art more for the experience than for professionalism.
Whenever I hear someone say 'I wish I could draw' my feelings are that you can draw for the...

How long does a picture usually take? That face sounds like it took quite a while.

My advice: Start doing it. You won't draw professionally but you'd be surprised what you could do with just line...

Nothing new, just had to do a comic version of Puffin's kidnapping for my site so I'll share it here:

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You don't have to post all of the nudes if you don't want to, but even if you did you could just put up a NSFW warning and say it's tasteful nudes.

You know we've had worse here.

What program...

Thanks man, and yeah I intend to keep this up for as long as I can.

God help me there's no going back now.

Aww shucks thanks dude.

Peppermint Butler: Secret God of Emerial Asskicking.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xg2vMrDzoXM

The twist is nice but Anyu and Sirmiq's dialogue feels too on the nose about the motivations of their tribe and their prejudices and such. Could use more clean up there.

Also Numilik sucks at...

I'd love to see the broom surfing be turned into a dynamic animation by Nickelodeon or Disney or something (yeah right >>;).
That final headshot looks especially nice.

This story feels like it could've been in the Twilight Zone and you chose a pretty good character to give the Nazis the heebie jeebies.

Works very well for a short story.

I'd be a vampire too if I could rock that old man hippie look forever.

Also keep up the good work.

While it's good that you have a plan I just realized that recklessness in a character is usually preceded by urgency or cockiness.
You don't need to go too far with either but going into Terry's...

Read The Penumbra Incident.

There's nothing I can really say except that it was short and sweet and a pretty smooth transition into something bigger. Appropriate for what it kind of the first...

Only read the meandering chapter so far.
It's good although if your editor wants to scrap it (and gives a non-bullshit reason for doing so), I would do so.
It's like Aliens: There were those cool...

Your feigned interest in writing sure FOOLED me huh Mumbling? >:P

This story is a whole of lot of telling and not showing. I can't really get involved with what the main character is thinking and feeling and overall the voice is glaringly bland. Also you kind of...

The rabbit from Presto's been busy.

Good luck on your friend's game project.

The only thing I would say is that I don't know if the spear is large or just very close to the viewer. Adding a shadow underneath might help.
Can't offer...

Heh is Hunson growing tentacles out of his face because that makes too much sense for me.

First the cons: I know I probably say this a lot but in this case you do need to read your dialogue out loud for the longer parts. Some of the longer paragraphs spoken by Thomas and anyone else feel...

I only got to the tail end and still had fun.
Also loved the game design part anyway. Sometimes I think we tend to start with writing but then go with exploring other means of expression which...

Hrm, I don't find anything technically wrong with it really (although it was kind of ambiguous sometimes when the narrative was talking about the old man with the box and the main character) but.......

I think you should trim quite a bit of the dialogue, especially any part that can be saved for later (like him getting too much into his job.) Also for the more comedic parts where he's rambling it's...

The part where Robin first punches through the wall then peeks through the hole is confusing. Might want to work on that.

The gag with the elevators and the frat boys escaping were hilarious and...

Aside from the usual 'read it aloud' stuff I say so that you can catch redundancies and stuff (also I'm tired bleh) I like the plot around Tikaani and Nukilik being expanded upon and I also love how...

This place is going to explode on Monday night.

So many feels... both for the sentimentality and the Ask Simon/Fanfics being rendered non-canon.